Let's Go For a Walk

Oh Dad, on this fine morn, let us go for a walk The road is quiet and the meadows wide On the way you can meet your friends and talk All you need is to keep your gloom aside Be assured we will be with you by your side Dad, you were once such a charming debonair How we want you to be smart as before Of late you always recline on your arm chair As children, we are upset to see you so sore We wish to see the lost cheer, you quickly restore Why keep unnecessary anxieties inside? Please know that you have no cause for alarm With children to support you by your side, Believe that you are free of all tormenting harm This positive thought you have to keep in mind, firm The love you lavished on us, we will never ever forget Don’t sit here so lonely, brooding and yawning Your present lack luster spirit is all that we object Going out and inhaling fresh air will be rewarding Come on Dad! Let us go for a walk this morning!
Feb.14.2022 Quintain (English) Poetry Contest Sponsor- Emile Pinet
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Date: 2/15/2022 9:05:00 PM
Hello Valsa ... we need to spend as much as we can with our parents and not assume they will be with us forever. Nice poetry indeed Valsa - Lindsay
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Date: 2/15/2022 12:42:00 PM
Lovely piece Valsa, excellently penned with nice rhyme and flow. Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 2/14/2022 6:38:00 AM
Such a touching poem, Vasla. It reflects that inner deep love for a weakling father. I can feel how wonderful your heart is and how deep your concern about your dad. Blessings my friend
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Date: 2/14/2022 5:54:00 AM
A heartfelt poem, Valsa. An endearing expression of true love in words of gratitude and grace.
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Date: 2/14/2022 2:21:00 AM
Our children and grandchildren help keep us young as we age and they inspire us and make us feel needed and loved as you have conveyed in this beautiful poem. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/14/2022 1:38:00 AM
There's no better place to be than be outside Valsa, lovely tribute to your father. Tom
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Date: 2/14/2022 1:30:00 AM
great tribute to your father.
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