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Million people in this world with aspirations touching the sky different role a man plays in life has countless blessings n insults. hoped for the best result but had to face the worst was fully prepared for the test but fate had something else for me. loved him/her whole heartedly despite,broke my heart repeatedly. doubt about the fidelity of the spouse or a battle to fight against disease. feeling like hell as come upon u no friend to share the grief innumerable thoughts to end life summoning the courage to do so. when the prob totally surmounts u and heart is crying ocean of tears when pain the inside is burning then plant a seed of confidence in heart. nourish the seed with self trust and care even the snow on the top will be at your feet one day. optimism is not being positive all the time but smiling at failure and ready to march forward with smile. what is the use of love which doesnt reciprocate properly instead kills u with its memories n presence nothing in this world is beautiful as life. no problem is so big enough to be foolish to end lives. believe me,there is no man who has not cried and wiped tears. life is a parcel of tears and smiles no second ceases but passes enjoy all the moments and do not cut them short. man is the most intelligent being but very foolish to commit suicide kill the problem and throw it away but not the wonderful life. To see the fairytale of our lives hero should last till the end fighting all the odds in the journey and enjoying its beauty. (A Poem for all,stating that suicide is not a permanent solution for problems in life but a coward's act.Value the gift given to us by god and remember that problems are also passing clouds and wont stay with us forever.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/27/2012 1:02:00 AM
your piece opens up so many questions and ideas to ponder. I enjoyed the soulful read and will probably read it again .. remarkable, kenisha.;) hugs!
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 10/27/2012 9:52:00 AM
thank you so much for your wonderful comment ,have a great weekend :)
Date: 10/14/2012 4:13:00 AM
A passionate verse...Well stated! Cynthia
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 10/14/2012 8:30:00 AM
thank you so much .have a great day :)
Date: 10/10/2012 3:59:00 PM
Emotional poem, you write very well Kenisha. - I like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 10/10/2012 11:28:00 PM
thank you so much and i will try to keep up my work.love and have a great day :)
Date: 9/30/2012 7:39:00 AM
A very moving and emotional write, my dear Kenisha! Thank you for sharing this morning! Big hugs, Jack
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 10/1/2012 3:01:00 AM
thank you so much ,have a great day :)
Date: 9/28/2012 8:55:00 PM
Kenisha, i've enjoyed reading your poem this morning! Thank you so much for sharing and for stopping by reading my advance present (poem) to our dear friend here, PD. Have a nice day always!!!!
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 9/29/2012 1:43:00 AM
thank you so much for the comment.i wish all the best to both you :).
Date: 9/26/2012 8:43:00 AM
"Nothing in this life is as beautiful as life" And " no problem is big enough foolishly to kill lives" These lines are philosophical and deserve to be written at the back of ones mind, am mad at this write up, writer, am going to rate this immeadiately..... Thanks for sharing And to hell with problem that can make me sad, talk more of suicide.
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 9/27/2012 7:36:00 AM
Thank you so much for your words.i am glad that this write has a very positive impact on the mind.have a great time.
Date: 9/19/2012 9:39:00 PM
Kenisha, your poem was very moving... , thank you for sharing your wonderful verse* good night :-) Linda aka~ PD
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 9/20/2012 1:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda :).have a great day.
Date: 9/19/2012 4:10:00 AM
Kenisha, A passionate verse, perhaps it will help some sad soul. (I invite you to read my verse, "On Being Green"...same subject. Cynthia
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 9/19/2012 8:44:00 AM
Thank you so much.i will be very glad if this really helps a sad person.have a great day.

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