Lets Fall In Love

If you could rewind time, would you choose me again? Or, trade your yesterdays for less anguish and pain. As today fades from view, let's welcome tomorrow. And think of the future; not dwell on past sorrow. Love's candle remains lit, yet it's now flickering. And it's all due to our fighting and bickering. There's still enough spark to relight passion's flame. And we've too much to lose not to restart the game. Let's fall in love once more, like we did at the start. And reaffirm our love, while we still share one heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 8:30 AM
Well expressed observation of how couples let things slip till there's a risk that it's too late. Love the way you wrapped up this poem at the end, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 9:03 AM
Thanks Line, your comments are most appreciated. Emile.
A  Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 1:44 PM
EMILE:) A lovely and beautiful win *Hugs* SKAT
Relish Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 7:07 AM
A well written piece... congrats on your win Emile
Pinet Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 8:24 AM
Thanks Nadiya, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Mehta Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 9:12 PM
Passionate expressions, congrats on the win,
Pinet Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 8:25 AM
Thank you, for your continued support. Emile.
Deschler Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 7:17 PM
A very soulful and passionate expression of undying love... A beautiful poem, Emile. Congrats on the win!
Pinet Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 8:25 AM
Thanks Kelly, for your encouragement. Emile.
Allison Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 6:51 PM
Lovely passionate write filled with such hope Emile:-) many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 8:26 AM
Thanks Jan, your continued support is appreciated. Emile.
Zerbst Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 6:03 PM
Amazing simile here. Some poems it feels like I already know before I read, but others such as this are kindled from a genuine imagination with artistry.
Pinet Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 8:27 AM
Thanks Isaiah, your words flatter me. Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 11:09 PM
Beautiful, Emile!!
Pinet Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 8:22 AM
Thank you very much Andrea, I appreciate it. Emile.
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 10:10 AM
Very beautiful pen Emile! Enjoyed reading your piece about loves hopes and dreams, bringing back this love to where its suppose to thrive and be . A 7 from me! Have a nice day! :) Love and hugs!xxxx D.^o^"
Pinet Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 6:22 PM
Your opinion is of great value ..as you have shown yourself to be a person of virtue with a strong sense of self, thank you..Emile.
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