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Lets Fall In Love

If you could rewind time, would you choose me again? Or trade your yesterdays for less anguish and pain. When today fades from view let's welcome tomorrow. And think of our future not dwell on past sorrow. Love's candle remains lit, but its flame's flickering. And it's all due to our fighting and bickering. There is enough spark left to ignite passion's flame. And we've too much to lose not to restart the game. Let's fall in love once more, as we did at the start. And consummate our love, while we still share one heart. (Quatrain) 1/15/2015

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Date: 3/3/2018 8:30:00 AM
Well expressed observation of how couples let things slip till there's a risk that it's too late. Love the way you wrapped up this poem at the end, Emile.
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:03:00 AM
Thanks Line, your comments are most appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/1/2015 1:44:00 PM
EMILE:) A lovely and beautiful win *Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/25/2015 7:07:00 AM
A well written piece... congrats on your win Emile
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Date: 1/25/2015 8:24:00 AM
Thanks Nadiya, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 1/24/2015 9:12:00 PM
Passionate expressions, congrats on the win,
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/25/2015 8:25:00 AM
Thank you, for your continued support. Emile.
Date: 1/24/2015 7:17:00 PM
A very soulful and passionate expression of undying love... A beautiful poem, Emile. Congrats on the win!
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Date: 1/25/2015 8:25:00 AM
Thanks Kelly, for your encouragement. Emile.
Date: 1/24/2015 6:51:00 PM
Lovely passionate write filled with such hope Emile:-) many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/25/2015 8:26:00 AM
Thanks Jan, your continued support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 1/17/2015 6:03:00 PM
Amazing simile here. Some poems it feels like I already know before I read, but others such as this are kindled from a genuine imagination with artistry.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/25/2015 8:27:00 AM
Thanks Isaiah, your words flatter me. Emile.
Date: 1/15/2015 11:09:00 PM
Beautiful, Emile!!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/16/2015 8:22:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 1/15/2015 10:10:00 AM
Very beautiful pen Emile! Enjoyed reading your piece about loves hopes and dreams, bringing back this love to where its suppose to thrive and be . A 7 from me! Have a nice day! :) Love and hugs!xxxx D.^o^"
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/15/2015 6:22:00 PM
Your opinion is of great value ..as you have shown yourself to be a person of virtue with a strong sense of self, thank you..Emile.

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