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Let's die

It was a height of 250 metres,
But I wasn’t afraid;
I looked down
And there wasn’t even my shade.

The sun was already jumping
But with a low speed,
“ I can perform better,
 I am not going to give the lead.”

Took a deep breath
And I was in air,
Time stopped,
And silence reached there.

The sun began moving upward,
Or I began moving downward,
I was flying,
But like a dead bird.

When from the ground,
I wasn’t really high,
Mind said,“ change in plan,
Let the sun first die”.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/8/2019 5:04:00 AM
VERY BRILLIANT CONCEPT. I LIKED THIS PIECE VERY MUCH. 7 OUT OF 7. KEEP WRITING...........HUGS //MANMATH//
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Lochan Chugh
Date: 11/9/2019 12:06:00 AM
Thank U Manmath .........
Date: 10/24/2019 8:37:00 AM
I liked this poem very much.It taught me that we don't have strong determination. Our mind suddenly changes after putting us in a tight spot. overall it was awesome and I liked the last stanza the most.
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Lochan Chugh
Date: 11/9/2019 12:07:00 AM
Thnx