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Let's die

It was a height of 250 metres, But I wasn’t afraid; I looked down And there wasn’t even my shade. The sun was already jumping But with a low speed, “ I can perform better, I am not going to give the lead.” Took a deep breath And I was in air, Time stopped, And silence reached there. The sun began moving upward, Or I began moving downward, I was flying, But like a dead bird. When from the ground, I wasn’t really high; Mind said,“ change in plan, Let the sun first die”.

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Date: 4/16/2020 1:26:00 PM
Hello Lochan Chugh,this poem shows me that when the body is tense the mind goes blank.Have qa nice day my friend. Be safe.
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Date: 11/8/2019 5:04:00 AM
VERY BRILLIANT CONCEPT. I LIKED THIS PIECE VERY MUCH. 7 OUT OF 7. KEEP WRITING...........HUGS //MANMATH//
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Lochan Chugh
Date: 11/9/2019 12:06:00 AM
Thank U Manmath .........
Date: 10/24/2019 8:37:00 AM
I liked this poem very much.It taught me that we don't have strong determination. Our mind suddenly changes after putting us in a tight spot. overall it was awesome and I liked the last stanza the most.
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Lochan Chugh
Date: 11/9/2019 12:07:00 AM
Thnx