Let's Die

It was a height of 250 metres,
But I wasn’t afraid;
I looked down
And there wasn’t even my shade.

The sun was already jumping
But with a low speed,
“ I can perform better,
 I am not going to give the lead.”

Took a deep breath
And I was in air,
Time stopped,
And silence reached there.

The sun began moving upward,
Or I began moving downward,
I was flying,
But like a dead bird.

When from the ground,
I wasn’t really high;
Mind said,“ change in plan,
Let the sun first die”.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 1:26 PM
Hello Lochan Chugh,this poem shows me that when the body is tense the mind goes blank.Have qa nice day my friend. Be safe.
Dalei Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 5:04 AM
VERY BRILLIANT CONCEPT. I LIKED THIS PIECE VERY MUCH. 7 OUT OF 7. KEEP WRITING...........HUGS //MANMATH//
Chugh Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 12:06 AM
Thank U Manmath .........
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October 24, 2019 at 8:37 AM
I liked this poem very much.It taught me that we don't have strong determination. Our mind suddenly changes after putting us in a tight spot. overall it was awesome and I liked the last stanza the most.
Chugh Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 12:07 AM
Thnx
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