Lets Be Open

Walk over to someone
you have never met. Give them
a smile. You will be surprised
at their reaction. Everyone needs
a friend. Perhaps that person
is you. Sometimes this world
can be a lonely place. People sitting
side by side never speaking.  A sea of
humanity isolated. People wanting
to be seen, afraid to speak. Wishing to
be noticed. Are you strong enough
to take the first step. Extend a hand
and you will come to know, you are 
remarkable. The world can use
more smiles. In the end you give
yourself a special gift. For you may
gain a special friend. 

Lets be open contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 7:47 AM
congratulations on your win Richard, i would have placed it higher xx
Lamoureux Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 8:05 AM
Thanks Mandy, you are kind. I'm lucky it was chosen I didn't follow the instructions.
A  Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 1:22 PM
Richard, . Love the win *Hugs* SKAT
A   Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 9:01 PM
Richard, , well done, congratulations in the Let's be Open contest... always~ LINDA
Anglesey Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 1:58 PM
I've been on this path myself for a while. Trying to be more open and giving gifts of kindness, and smiling acknowledgements. It's work sometimes but great when it comes back to you:)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 8:57 AM
Thanks Karen, you are so right.
Tacito Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 7:52 AM
So, so true...dare to open the heart and let it shine through the thickest of fogs.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 8:20 AM
Thanks Drake
Manassian Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 3:28 AM
This beautiful, Richard, but sometimes when you are open, you wind up getting hurt, way beyond what you can bear. So, yes, let's be open but cautious, for too many wounds can break a heart. I'm a very open person...I'm learning to change for self-preservation. Guess this in itself was rather open...I'm hopeless! "A time to speak, and time to be silent...a time to embrace and a time to be refrain from embracing. For everything, there is a time!" I always have time to read your work! Always!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 7:01 AM
So we take a chance that we will be hurt, the love we receive far outweighs the hurt and I will be happy to risk all for but a few moments. Don't change a highly guarded heart is an empty one. Yours is Beautifuly placed on your sleeve for all to see.
Onclaud Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 3:17 PM
gracious write filled with uplifitng words and incredible tone... this looks like a free verse or light poetry... awesome!..:)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 7:26 PM
Thanks so much Nette, I love hearing from you because you are so sweet.
Colasurdo Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 9:33 AM
What a deep but simple truth...why is it so hard for us to do? Like a ripple in a pond a smile can reach farther than we can see. Truly a Gem Rick,
Lamoureux Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 9:37 AM
Thanks again Bernard, heading off to work, have a blessed day.
Colasurdo Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 9:34 AM
oh going into my favs : )
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