Let's Be Brave 2k11

Many souls linger therein pity's pot.  
Many minds subcomb thereto th' Addler's.  
O, shall we permit ourselves hereto rot?  
So challenges white waters -- the heart of Paddler's.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Delacroix Avatar
July 30, 2011 at 5:09 PM
Interesting expressions and notions, and thought provoking quatrain. Thanks for sharing, Caroline.
Ball Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 2:04 AM
Excellent rhythm, rhyme aand imagery. Nice job. God Bless, JB
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July 6, 2011 at 1:41 AM
Thanks to all of the poets whom have simply taken the time to read my Quatrain. A fellow poet, - Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.
Ball Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 10:50 AM
I think you are talking about courage here. Puts me in mind of some advice I heard concerning having courage in any situation. Take a lesson from the duck, On the surface look calm and serene and underneath paddle like crazy. Good job here my friend. God Bless, JB
Fiery Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 10:31 PM
your poems are always creatived . This is equally marvellous .
Brown Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 5:47 AM
Wishing you a wonderful day and weekend too. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Anthony. I hope your weekend is filled with love and joy and you find your soul filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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June 9, 2011 at 6:30 PM
Anthony~ a real great poem,, nice thing to hold on too..... enjoyed,,p.d.
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June 9, 2011 at 6:16 PM
I think this write is awesome! You said much with few words, but the word choice provoke the thought you want to evoke. I especially like the last line. You are A Writer, and the quatrain is perfect. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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