Lethal Weapon

lethal weapon
 
candlelight dances 
on your face as we sit 
at opposite ends of this table
 
even from that far away 
my eyes trace the edges 
of your curvy lips
 
they make me want to purrrrr 
like a minx or a sable

the things you do me
even from across a long table
 
you should be licensed 
as a lethal weapon
 
your eyes bring me to my knees 
and make me want to do naughty 
things to you while I'm able
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Welch Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 11:55 PM
This is very cool, but I would try to add some more imagery to each stanza to help accentuate this persona as a lethal weapon
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