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Lethal Weapon

lethal weapon candlelight dances on your face as we sit at opposite ends of this table even from that far away my eyes trace the edges of your curvy lips they make me want to purrrrr like a minx or a sable the things you do me even from across a long table you should be licensed as a lethal weapon your eyes bring me to my knees and make me want to do naughty things to you while I'm able

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/28/2010 11:55:00 PM
This is very cool, but I would try to add some more imagery to each stanza to help accentuate this persona as a lethal weapon
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