Let You Go

It’s hard to believe we could float on,

After all you said and did,

Your voice is still in my head,

It seems impossible to forget you,

And I am stupid enough to believe,

I could see all your lies.

But why do I feel like every grain of sand in the sea,

Is smothering me out,

And the water is pressuring me down,

Down mentally and physically,

As I feel the sand travel through my mouth and nose to fill my veins,

I hear your voice in my brain,

Laugh and say, “Down baby down, I can float on without you”.

Let go! I yell and plead with my heart,

Let...go…of…her…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 19, 2011 at 10:14 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Timmy.
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