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Let You Breathe

I know that I love him, but does he love me ? The things that he's saying...its hard to believe. Some days I feel it and I just can't let go ; Then he changes and his true colors show. I love you to death ; cant you see ? So why then, are you doing this to me ? I can't live without you so please don't leave... But if that's what you really want...i'll let you breathe...

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Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 11/27/2010 12:35:00 PM

I enjoyed this poem... I've been in this place where you just don't know whick way your love will go. Stay strong. Lay

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2010 5:14:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jazmin. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/3/2010 1:00:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight... soup offers many contests ...check them out and enter.. and good luck.. have a safe and happy holiday weekend..with luv..