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'H Form - Hybronnet ' Contest Info

Sponsor Constance La France

 

"A miracle is really the only way to describe motherhood and giving birth." -

Jennie Finch

They sat in love below a willow tree, And from afar, they heard the rumbling sea. He looked at her; green eyes seemed full of tears. He asked what's wrong, afraid he saw some fears. I am afraid, she said. I dare not tell. The vale is vast, and flowers spread their smell. I'm tired, my back aches, and I yearn for figs. I'm hungry, oh, for a plate of spare ribs. He stood and ran towards the sea in haste, And with clothes on, he jumped, feeling abase. The cold sea spray calmed down his tattered thoughts. He loved her and began to dream of cots. He took her in his arms and kissed her sweet, We'll wed and have so many more to greet.
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Date: 10/1/2024 7:06:00 AM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my Hybronnet contest, beautifully penned, love the image and quote, Constance
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Date: 9/21/2024 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. I am delighted to see it on the winners' list. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara ..Probably not supposed to be humorous, but for some reason I found lines in this one humorous.
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Date: 9/16/2024 1:36:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write again. What a fun picture. Have a blessed day with your win..................
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Date: 9/9/2024 11:28:00 AM
A treasure of feelings, I enjoyed. Hugs my friend
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Date: 9/2/2024 9:16:00 AM
This is a sweet poem Victor that embraces love!
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Date: 8/31/2024 2:06:00 PM
By the way. I forgot to answer your question. I think you handled Iambic meter very well here.
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Date: 8/31/2024 6:56:00 PM
Thank you. Hugs.
Date: 8/31/2024 8:33:00 AM
What a lovely write with a great picture. True love is very special. "Good Luck" Looks like we both did this one. Have a blessed day/night writing away...............
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Date: 8/30/2024 2:45:00 AM
What a joyous ending ! How well you have stepped into their shoes and shared their excitement as if you were a party to it. All the Best dear Victor !
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Date: 8/29/2024 11:57:00 PM
You have a way with words, my friend, felt like I was at the Cotton Bowl watching the Dallas Cowboys ... Cheerleaders, dreamy 'twas wasn't for that briny sea air ... OK, I'm up
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Date: 8/29/2024 3:24:00 PM
Oh, this is a special poem Victor. Sweet :)
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Date: 8/29/2024 9:25:00 AM
Dear Victor, A true treat and a lovely read this morning with romance, sea, love, and marriage. You truly have the heart for these love poems and it is obvious. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/29/2024 4:42:00 AM
He had to drive, whereas we were air lifted. He was in tears and nearly got a speeding ticket (the officer was kind to him).
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Date: 8/29/2024 4:41:00 AM
Love this and how I can visualize the couple with their unique personalities! Your quote: a miracle indeed. Carrying a child and wondering about the life within you, knowing that something will happen and then the birth. My firstborn had to be flown to a hospital and have surgery, the day after, and I didn’t know how to feel. I held her in my arms getting to know her as I waited for my husband to arrive.
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Date: 8/28/2024 6:17:00 PM
Very well done, love the romantic verse.
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Date: 8/28/2024 5:03:00 PM
A creative and very lovely poem, Victor. Thank you for sharing. :)
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Date: 8/28/2024 3:52:00 PM
Very interesting one, Victor. Gosh I hope I find time to work on contests. I was on a trip and am just now trying to catch up on contests
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Date: 8/28/2024 2:24:00 PM
You write the most romantic episodes of love Victor, I'd buy your books any day !
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Date: 8/28/2024 11:52:00 AM
Ah, this is romantic...:) loved the images
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Date: 8/28/2024 10:41:00 AM
This is lovely and it flows so well.. nice design also.. an interesting time of sonnet..
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Date: 8/28/2024 1:26:00 AM
A lovely love story/poem in Hybronnet form Victor. All the best… Beryl
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Date: 8/28/2024 12:34:00 AM
Awwn this is so sweet and beautiful to the eyes and soul dear victor, you rhyme just effortlessly and in such a beautiful manner. And you write romance in such a seamless manner while also painting imagery, its like watching a scene as i read your word weaving! I think youv nailed this form. I must also soon rhyme. Hah so lazy to rhyme tho. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always
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Date: 8/27/2024 10:41:00 PM
True love always finds a way, it was meant to be. Tom
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