Let Us Dance

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Come let us dance, to God's love beat, that we feel complete, heart upbeat. Leap into the void, take a chance; to God's love beat, come let us dance! Transcending form, let bliss fill us, as we ride, aboard God's love bus. Heart delights, centred in this storm; let bliss fill us, transcending form. 01-October-2022 (Swap Quatrain)

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/5/2022 11:38:00 PM

I cannot fathom which is more joyful, the poem or the picture. They both spell bliss.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/6/2022 12:03:00 AM

Yea, these swap quatrains sound good mostly

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2022 8:49:00 AM

This are interesting forms and not so easy to write but you have done a good job with this one. Way to go. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/6/2022 12:04:00 AM

Not for a contest but yes, I like this form, recently introduced to me by Emile Pinet ~ for one of his contests, I think, in which I did participate ~ https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/say_it_like_it_is_1485237

Becky Forbes

Date: 9/30/2022 3:50:00 PM

"Heart delights, centred in this storm; let bliss fill us, transcending form." T H I S !!!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/1/2022 1:32:00 AM

So happy you enjoyed this one, Becky!