Let Us Dance

Come let us dance, to God's love beat,
that we feel complete, heart upbeat.
Leap into the void, take a chance;
to God's love beat, come let us dance!

Transcending form, let bliss fill us,
as we ride, aboard God's love bus.
Heart delights, centred in this storm;
let bliss fill us, transcending form.

01-October-2022

(Swap Quatrain)

dancegodlovequatrain

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Caren Krutsinger

October 5, 2022 at 11:38 PM

I cannot fathom which is more joyful, the poem or the picture. They both spell bliss.

Unseeking Seeker

October 6, 2022 at 12:03 AM

Yea, these swap quatrains sound good mostly

Sara Kendrick

October 1, 2022 at 8:49 AM

This are interesting forms and not so easy to write but you have done a good job with this one. Way to go. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Unseeking Seeker

October 6, 2022 at 12:04 AM

Not for a contest but yes, I like this form, recently introduced to me by Emile Pinet ~ for one of his contests, I think, in which I did participate ~ https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/say_it_like_it_is_1485237