Funom Makama Poet Rhyme

Let There Be Peace

Let there be peace!
the door to co-existence
has not, so many keys
and creating minorities
is definitely conflict's niece.

Let there be peace!
Forgiveness and tolerance
makes all live at ease.
If discrimination is given a chance
hatred, it will lease.

Let there be peace!
why do we allow unnecessary negativities
put us under hot quiz
and unfortunate repercussions,
at us they laugh and tease?

Let there be peace!
If dwelling on differences does not cease
everyone will pay
the huge fees.

Let there be peace!
tasting the bitter fruit of war
even if it is a piece
takes away good conscience.
The plenty suffering it gives
our sense of humanity they seize.

Let there be peace!
Are we lower than the bees;
that we can't fly and create together?
Are we less matured than the geese;
that we cannot sing and dance
by the waters together?

No, we aren't!
Let's live in peace
and act higher up the Animal Kingdom
where we are,
to live void of wars, please......

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Poet Destroyer A July 29, 2014 at 9:00 AM Soup mail Funom Makama July 29, 2014 at 9:22 AM ok

Mark Anthony Cotterman April 2, 2014 at 6:03 PM oh how i love this! a great write and a great message. so wonderful to read you again. Funom Makama April 7, 2014 at 10:49 AM Thanks a lot Mark Cotterman

Rob Carter April 1, 2014 at 4:49 PM Funom, this is a really good piece. Like the message and the flow is good, goes really well with the content. Rob Funom Makama April 2, 2014 at 6:07 AM Thanks a lot Robe Carter... I really do appreciate your comment

Phyllis Babcock March 29, 2014 at 9:56 AM I love the wonderful message you give in this poem. Let there be peace and let us learn to share and care. AWESOME. love phyl Funom Makama March 29, 2014 at 12:42 PM Yes Phyllis... Thanks a lot for your encouragement

Len Gasun March 29, 2014 at 5:30 AM This is a very lovely inspirational poem with it's wonderful message of peace my dear friend Funom. I love it and hand salute for this excellent write and song. Thank u so much for sharing and it's such an honor to read it this afternoon. Thank u so much as well for stopping on my poem. More blessings! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Funom Makama March 29, 2014 at 12:42 PM Oh Leonora Galinta... What more can I say? Thanks a lot

Poet Destroyer A March 29, 2014 at 2:18 AM I love the message and feeling in your poem... You pinned a powerful point here... always~ Linda Funom Makama March 29, 2014 at 12:41 PM Thanks a lot Poet Destroyer

Richard Lamoureux March 28, 2014 at 1:47 PM Much better! Funom Makama March 29, 2014 at 12:41 PM Thank you so much Richard for your encouragement

Richard Lamoureux March 27, 2014 at 7:07 PM Hi Funom, consider substituting inclusion for discrimination in line nine. I don't believe you were wanting to promote descrimination based on the rest of this fine piece of writing. Funom Makama March 28, 2014 at 1:43 PM Thank you so so so soooo much Richard... I will rephrase that line to make its meaning plane.. Thanks once again for all your encouraging words