Let There Be Light

C:  Bone from Adam, creates 
Eve, Nature seeds, Mothers 
womb; and A miracle, 
Breeds....
R:  A child is born, life unfolds, 
bodies with souls searching for 
their goals, minds corrupt by 
evil, and the journey of life gets 
so cold....
C:  Where Sin bit her greed, in 
air, The apple-tree, selfishly 
lyes, laid; Now poisoned, gave 
us free hunger of will,banished 
them in guilt, but GOD forgave 
their judgement...   
R:  ....and held their hands, 
bleeding the blood to once 
again, give us the key to 
eternal life,,,Amen...

Written by: The Drem Team 
"Richard Palmer and Carma 
Reed"

On; May 13, of 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/23/2013 10:50:00 AM
God is the God of second chances..Interesting work that you have penned in collaboration..Sara
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 9/27/2013 10:06:00 AM
Thank You Sara always a pleasure,,,, Carma
Date: 7/21/2013 2:41:00 PM
Creativity from creation's crest. Lovely team Carma and Richard. Love. Angel
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 9/27/2013 10:05:00 AM
Thank You a lot Angel, we are unstoppable..... Tru blessings, nuff luv,,, Carma
Date: 6/19/2013 2:42:00 PM
this amazing poetry, truly glad i found this...
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/19/2013 4:35:00 PM
hi my dear sweet harry, thanx so much, I have come so far in my writes thanx to Richie he's such A true amazing person and writer.... xxx carma
Date: 6/10/2013 12:14:00 PM
LOVE IT GREAT INSIGHT HOW ARE YOU XXX DAVIDSCOTT
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 6/10/2013 12:21:00 PM
Hi my dear David been away for awhile, glad you enjoyed the light, I have been good.... Xxx Carma
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