Let There Be Light

C:  Bone from Adam, creates 
Eve, Nature seeds, Mothers 
womb; and A miracle, 
Breeds....
R:  A child is born, life unfolds, 
bodies with souls searching for 
their goals, minds corrupt by 
evil, and the journey of life gets 
so cold....
C:  Where Sin bit her greed, in 
air, The apple-tree, selfishly 
lyes, laid; Now poisoned, gave 
us free hunger of will,banished 
them in guilt, but GOD forgave 
their judgement...   
R:  ....and held their hands, 
bleeding the blood to once 
again, give us the key to 
eternal life,,,Amen...

Written by: The Drem Team 
"Richard Palmer and Carma 
Reed"

On; May 13, of 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 10:50 AM
God is the God of second chances..Interesting work that you have penned in collaboration..Sara
Sanderson Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 10:06 AM
Thank You Sara always a pleasure,,,, Carma
Angel-Simon Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 2:41 PM
Creativity from creation's crest. Lovely team Carma and Richard. Love. Angel
Sanderson Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 10:05 AM
Thank You a lot Angel, we are unstoppable..... Tru blessings, nuff luv,,, Carma
Horsman Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 2:42 PM
this amazing poetry, truly glad i found this...
Sanderson Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 4:35 PM
hi my dear sweet harry, thanx so much, I have come so far in my writes thanx to Richie he's such A true amazing person and writer.... xxx carma
Scott Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 12:14 PM
LOVE IT GREAT INSIGHT HOW ARE YOU XXX DAVIDSCOTT
Sanderson Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 12:21 PM
Hi my dear David been away for awhile, glad you enjoyed the light, I have been good.... Xxx Carma
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