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Let the Sun Shine

inhibited
by the shackles of low esteem
she staggers 
under the weight
of suppressed emotions 

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©pc 24th February, 2023

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Sneha Rv

Date: 6/26/2023 6:12:00 AM

dangerously easy to restrict ourselves it does seem sometimes..

Paul Callus
Date: 6/27/2023 12:57:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Sneha. In life we should never underestimate ourselves; we all have a lot to offer. Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/12/2023 10:51:00 AM

A powerful write for all ages. Have a wonderful day writing away.............

Paul Callus
Date: 3/12/2023 11:53:00 AM

Thank you for yet another visit today, Paula; Your comments are appreciated, my friend. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/3/2023 9:32:00 AM

WOW Paul, what a clever, clever, eloquent, poignant write, without looking below, I would give this POTD twice running. I think if a student does not blend into a particular scolastic environment, it can lead to major problems going forward into adulthood. Yet often ,the most seemingly outgoing people, are the ones that harbor 'suppressed emotions' and 'shackles of low esteem'. Kindest regards, Jennifer.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/11/2023 9:49:00 AM

You have the ability to comment with such ease and sincerity, Jenny! Thank you for these insightful comments, my friend. Hope you having a lovely weekend. Warm regards & blessings // paul

Fin Chuuk

Date: 2/24/2023 6:29:00 PM

That used to be me. Until I learned to love myself. Fabulously done!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/26/2023 1:52:00 PM

I'm glad you found the will to positively change your life around, Fin. Thank you for the lovely comments. ~ Regards // paul

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 2/24/2023 4:23:00 PM

Very touching, beautiful poem, I can surely relate.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/26/2023 1:36:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Aysha. Hope you had a lovely weekend. Regards // paul

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/24/2023 4:19:00 PM

This shows how crippling depression can be, I have carried the shackles of low esteem myself so this one struck a cord with me~

Paul Callus
Date: 2/26/2023 11:04:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and feedback, Michelle. Hope you're keeping well. ~ Regards // paul

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/24/2023 3:13:00 PM

It must be tough to be a kid these days. sadly it is reality for a lot of folks. A heavy read, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/26/2023 10:55:00 AM

Hi Danny, I'm pleased to see you here; been a while since our paths crossed. Thank you for reading and commenting, my friend. Regards // paul

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/24/2023 11:49:00 AM

I blame social media for hyping it up on how people should be and many fail to live up to it, and then it's a downward spiral. Hope you're well Paul, enjoy your weekend. Tom

Paul Callus
Date: 2/24/2023 12:37:00 PM

Thank you, Tom....and yes, I agree with you. Many fear that they are under-achieving, and this could lead to mental problems, especially anxiety, stress and depression. ~ Best regards, my friend // paul

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