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Let the Dawn Break In

I wait for the moment The night to fall Look up the sky Stars galore Nightingales call Its time to sing Forget all your pain Wash away your sins The moon feels alone As the whole city sleeps Out there somewhere A lonely soul weeps Forget all your pain Its time to sing Let new love come through the door Through the tears of joy Let the dawn break in

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Dan Kearley

Date: 5/26/2012 11:30:00 AM

Very nice! It has a sadness with pain,and a little bit of joy... I like it :-) Where have you been?

Ashek Rahaman
Date: 5/26/2012 9:39:00 PM

receiving any comment from you is special, i wrote 10 Poems in may...not bad huh. hope some day i can write as good as you.no matter how angry or annoyed you get, i think u r a great poet and really admire your work.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2012 12:57:00 PM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Ashek. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 5/21/2012 4:03:00 AM

Really nice poem - Thank you!