Let Sweat Flood the Halls

Water builds in the ends of fingers and toes
It’s always there first
Rising, filling up, inching closer to the heart
To the core of dreaded distant thoughts

Like a water balloon
Expanding, ready at a moments notice to pop.
Pouring sickly sweat from each tiny hole that covers the body
Gathering at your feet-
A puddle
A clear cut reflection
A reason to drown.

Sink deeper, let the sweat erupt from ears and nose
From mouth and eyes, sweat drips
Create a river and watch the people around you
Float, swim, perform a blindfolded butterfly stroke as the room fills up and-
And it’s unstoppable.

Lakes will etch into the concrete from the sweat that creeps
Eyes like hoses that shoot at eye contact
Nails that peel back at the pressure as the sweat builds, builds,
Never ends
God how it never ends

Let the sweat flood the halls
Of scarred tissue ruined from scratches
Of beaten hearts that soak in sweat like a line to the sweetest desire.
Let the sweat floods the halls
Of veins that penetrate souls touched by no one
Of concrete white that’s the same at every turn
Let the sweat floods the halls and sit and watch and drown, cease breath, brain shut, heart stop.
Let the sweat floods the halls and see how they look in despair
In utter confusion as to what is wrong
What is wrong?

The sweat, the sweat, that drips and gathers and leaves a trail like a well-moisturised snail 
It doesn’t stop.
Never will.

Let the sweat flood the halls wherever you go
Let yourself float - drowning is not an option.
Let yourself swim the surface
Let yourself look down and rise above.
Rise above the sweat that floods the halls.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 7/7/2024 3:45:00 PM
Ok I totally picked to read this poem because I am currently sweating but I am glad that I am because this was a lovely and creative read. The fourth and fifth stanzas I particularly enjoyed. I also really like that I cannot tell/guess what your motivation is for writing it.
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Ethan Klastaitas
Date: 7/8/2024 1:21:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, glad you enjoyed!
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