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Let s Rhyme

Let's Rhyme

It’s rhyming recitation,
No race or competition;
Memorize table of multiplication,
Which is a short way of addition.

Addition is a numerical expansion,
It’s an opposite of subtraction,
Process shown repeatedly in division,
I hope you don’t have any objection.

Now, may I have all your attention,
Just an advise in piece or portion,
Always love and value education,
And master each fundamental math operation.

If you want rapid and higher progression,
Join rhyme poetry course and session;
Read dictionaries for correct pronunciation,
Accept constructive feedback and correction.

Copyright © Len Gasun | Year Posted 2023

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Len Gasun Date: 12/26/2023 12:00:00 AM let's rhyme Contest Judged: 12/13/2023 7:03:00 AM Sponsored by: Shadow Hamilton Place 6 (up to 9 single w) Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/12/2023 9:05:00 AM very clever use of words Len well done on placing hugs Shadow Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 12/26/2023 12:01:00 AM Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Shadow. Your approval on my poem through my win means a lot to me. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Ink Empress Date: 12/6/2023 4:02:00 AM How creatively fun and captivating are your rhymes! I love this, very unique and and so well articulated, i am not very good with rhymes, it doesnt come easy for me, but i admire rhymes and I absolutely love the lines here such as “ Accept constructive feedback and correct“ i agree with that and all that you’ve conveyed here as a message so poetically, pleasure reading this brilliant take, im sure you will do well in the contest. Sending you light always Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 12/6/2023 5:55:00 PM Thank you so much my dear poet friend Ink for reading my poem and your inspiring words. This was the only idea that came into my mind. Thank you so much for the light and sending it back to you dear. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs. I'll visit you again soon ok.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 12/5/2023 7:11:00 AM Your "Let's Rhyme" is a fun/creative rhyme write. Love It... Have a great/blessed day................ Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 12/5/2023 7:40:00 AM Thank you my dearest poet friend Paula for reading my poem and your uplifting comments. But I realized two words don't rhyme with the rest so I camw back to edit it. Thanks a lot again and your warm greetings. Have a blessed/ day too. Hugs...hugs

Len Gasun Date: 12/5/2023 7:02:00 AM To be added soon: If you want to express your objection, I’m open to ideas, opinion, supplementation; Let’s all have teamwork and cooperation, For peace and unity, keys to a successful nation. Login to Reply