LET PAIN SPEAK

Silence cuts the marrow.  
Tears carve stone in ribs.  
Shadows weigh the chest.  
A pulse breaks stillness.   
Grief learns its own voice.  
Words crack but still breathe.  
Let pain speak at last.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 4:10 PM
Silence is hard, especially when grief is involved. I liked 'grief learns its own voice'...so true and beautifully said. Faving
Velasco Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 8:34 PM
Thank you… I’m glad that line spoke to you. Grief really does find its own way of speaking, even when words fail us.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 3:19 PM
Silence and pain…I hard grief!
Velasco Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 8:34 PM
Yes… silence can feel so heavy when grief is raw. Sending you strength and gentle moments of peace.
Hind Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 10:23 PM
Raw imagery- yes, it does speak, Ms. <3
Velasco Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 8:35 PM
Thank you! I’m glad it resonated… there’s something about raw words that just can’t be ignored
Greenhough Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 6:56 PM
These words are heavy and draw me in. I've known this heaviness of pain. Well done.
Velasco Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 6:58 PM
Thank you very much. Sometimes the heaviest feelings carry the deepest beauty, and I wanted to honor that truth.
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