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Let One Loose

I accidentally let one loose Sipping the communion juice The priest looked down With a disapproving frown Some parishioners gasped Mothers, their babies clasped The sexton's voice rasped: Via the air displaced We are all disgraced The Lord's name debased ... That would've been the end But then I did it again ... A little louder this time ~ To highlight the rhyme

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Susan Gentry

Date: 7/12/2018 6:17:00 PM

Lol! Funny. Has to be a winner :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/12/2018 9:36:00 PM

As long as it's not a 'looser,' I guess … Thanks, Susan!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/10/2018 7:03:00 AM

You are a tooting hoot my friend ;p giggles galore <3

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/10/2018 10:45:00 AM

Funny, I always thought I was a hooting toot … :) gw

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/10/2018 2:14:00 AM

Lay off vegetables for a while lol. Tom.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/10/2018 2:50:00 AM

You really cracked me up with this comment, Tom! Thank you, Dr. Cunningham! Best always, Gershon

Jan Allison

Date: 7/10/2018 1:12:00 AM

ha ha ha very amusing GW, good luck in the contest, the sponsor has a tough one to judge with this contest I've seen some awesome entries. In my early days on soup I posted a poem called 'lettuce pray' its sort of on a farty theme lol:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/10/2018 2:49:00 AM

Well, I guess that this is a subject dear to our hearts, or at least to our gastro-intestinal tract. Thanks for checking this one out, Jan! Best wishes, Gershon

Lyric Man

Date: 7/9/2018 11:48:00 PM

Oh my gosh, this was funny.. then, at the end (no pun intended) you took it to hilarious!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/10/2018 2:47:00 AM

Very punny, L.M! Thank you, as always, for your kind words. Best wishes, Gershon

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/9/2018 9:57:00 PM

Hahahaha - this is so hilarious! Reads like a winner to me! Good luck in the contest, Gershon! Best regards. Pandita

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/10/2018 2:46:00 AM

Thank you for the encouragement, Pandita! Best to you, Gershon