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Let my tears stream down for her

Let my tears stream down for her...... How do I tell you about my love that I had with her She was like an angel who walked beside me She was the star that shined deeply in my heart She was my life and my dreams of future No one knows what stored in my heart for her My love for her, is beyond what words can say Her love played with me like the strings of a violin and it gave me a pleasure of unconditional love She was everything to me like a sun in the sky Her love cannot be matched with anything in this world Now she's no longer with me, left this world for good The heaven has stolen her from me but not from my soul Life without her nothing but a pain in my heart and soul Without her love is living like a prisoner in my own life Her love will be remembered with me till my end Till then let my tears stream down my face forever for her. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2018 - Ravi Sathasivam

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Date: 4/8/2019 9:11:00 PM
Your tribute to your love is beautifully expressed in this moving poem Ravi. A loss like you have endured will never be forgotten. I am sorry for your pain my friend. Blessings, Connie xxoo
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Date: 6/25/2018 9:58:00 PM
Deep and moving ... A love to fondly remember ...
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Date: 6/25/2018 11:24:00 AM
You started with a heavenly love wrapped up in wonderous imagery.. it was sweet and lovely! Then we got your twist! The so treasured unconditional love regained the beyond! A poignant piece of art, love and beauty! A pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and blessed.
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Date: 6/21/2018 6:51:00 AM
Your moving heartfelt emotional words are felt far and wide Ravi. You have a Love to remember. An excellent write....Maria
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Date: 6/25/2018 2:08:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated very much.
Date: 6/16/2018 3:32:00 AM
Oh, so sad, Ravi, deep and profound, and a gem of a poem, to one you love,,
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Date: 6/25/2018 2:08:00 AM
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Date: 6/15/2018 4:27:00 AM
Holding her memory in your heart..A touching write Ravi
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Date: 6/25/2018 2:08:00 AM
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Date: 6/13/2018 8:10:00 PM
A heart felt poem of love and loss, I have enjoyed every word, You have an angel above watching over you
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Date: 6/25/2018 2:08:00 AM
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Date: 6/13/2018 6:41:00 PM
Oh, Ravi, how sad it is to lose someone so beloved. Wish I could take some of your tears away, but writing about it can help. And you have certainly written this beautifully. Hugs for you, Carolyn
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Date: 6/25/2018 2:08:00 AM
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Date: 6/13/2018 3:27:00 PM
The pain on losing a beloved one is very well expressed in these striking lines, Ravi. One needs not be a prisoner to sad memories...falling back on lovely memories helps to ease the pain. Regards // paul
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Date: 6/25/2018 2:08:00 AM
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Date: 6/13/2018 7:05:00 AM
Such a loving tribute Ravi..your love and longing flows throughout. Sweet memories will live for ever..stay strong my friend.
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Date: 6/25/2018 2:08:00 AM
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Date: 6/13/2018 4:43:00 AM
ohh my... i am moved by your honest expression of emotional pain... ravi, this is really good!... huggs
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Date: 6/25/2018 2:09:00 AM
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Date: 6/13/2018 4:35:00 AM
- A touching poem that has a profound influence, Ravi - Excellent written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/25/2018 2:09:00 AM
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Date: 6/25/2018 2:09:00 AM
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Date: 6/13/2018 4:28:00 AM
Whoa.. this is a sad but captivating tale. I enjoyed this read very much!
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Date: 6/25/2018 2:09:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated very much.