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Let My Tears Stream Down For Her

Let my tears stream down for her......

How do I tell you about my love that I had with her
She was like an angel who walked beside me
She was the star that shined deeply in my heart
She was my life and my dreams of future
No one knows what stored in my heart for her
My love for her, is beyond what words can say
Her love played with me like the strings of a violin
and it gave me a pleasure of unconditional love
She was everything to me like a sun in the sky
Her love cannot be matched with anything in this world
Now she's no longer with me, left this world for good
The heaven has stolen her from me but not from my soul
Life without her nothing but a pain in my heart and soul
Without her love is living like a prisoner in my own life
Her love will be remembered with me till my end
Till then let my tears stream down my face forever for her.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Connie Marcum Wong Date: 4/8/2019 9:11:00 PM Your tribute to your love is beautifully expressed in this moving poem Ravi. A loss like you have endured will never be forgotten. I am sorry for your pain my friend. Blessings, Connie xxoo Login to Reply

Probir Gupta Date: 6/25/2018 9:58:00 PM Deep and moving ... A love to fondly remember ... Login to Reply

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 6/25/2018 11:24:00 AM You started with a heavenly love wrapped up in wonderous imagery.. it was sweet and lovely! Then we got your twist! The so treasured unconditional love regained the beyond! A poignant piece of art, love and beauty! A pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and blessed. Login to Reply

Maria Williams Date: 6/21/2018 6:51:00 AM Your moving heartfelt emotional words are felt far and wide Ravi. You have a Love to remember. An excellent write....Maria Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/25/2018 2:08:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated very much.

Harry Horsman Date: 6/16/2018 3:32:00 AM Oh, so sad, Ravi, deep and profound, and a gem of a poem, to one you love,, Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/25/2018 2:08:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated very much.

Joseph May Date: 6/15/2018 4:27:00 AM Holding her memory in your heart..A touching write Ravi Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/25/2018 2:08:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated very much.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 6/13/2018 8:10:00 PM A heart felt poem of love and loss, I have enjoyed every word, You have an angel above watching over you Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/25/2018 2:08:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated very much.

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/13/2018 6:41:00 PM Oh, Ravi, how sad it is to lose someone so beloved. Wish I could take some of your tears away, but writing about it can help. And you have certainly written this beautifully. Hugs for you, Carolyn Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/25/2018 2:08:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated very much.

Paul Callus Date: 6/13/2018 3:27:00 PM The pain on losing a beloved one is very well expressed in these striking lines, Ravi. One needs not be a prisoner to sad memories...falling back on lovely memories helps to ease the pain. Regards // paul Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/25/2018 2:08:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated very much.

Vijay Pandit Date: 6/13/2018 7:05:00 AM Such a loving tribute Ravi..your love and longing flows throughout. Sweet memories will live for ever..stay strong my friend. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/25/2018 2:08:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated very much.

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/13/2018 4:43:00 AM ohh my... i am moved by your honest expression of emotional pain... ravi, this is really good!... huggs Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/25/2018 2:09:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated very much.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2018 4:35:00 AM - A touching poem that has a profound influence, Ravi - Excellent written - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/25/2018 2:09:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated very much. Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/25/2018 2:09:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated very much.

Lyric Man Date: 6/13/2018 4:28:00 AM Whoa.. this is a sad but captivating tale. I enjoyed this read very much! Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/25/2018 2:09:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my friend. Appreciated very much.