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Let My Love Clutches With You

Let my love clutches with you
 
When the full moon spark its brightness on earth
When the silent ocean waves throw its sand onto the shore
When all those seagulls hover in the sky
When the lovely night brings you close to me
Let my love clutches with you with my deep feelings

When the lighthouse light guides all those sail boats at the sea
When the sound of music is passes us in the air
When the cool breeze dances in the mountain's valleys
When the mid night flowers throw their fragrances 
Let my love clutches with you with my deep feelings.

When your body touches my heart
When my heart gets into your soul
When our love set free to recover all those lost memories
When your grace so great and your beauty shown vast
Let my love clutches with you with my deep feelings.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Paul Callus Date: 11/12/2015 10:17:00 AM True and heartfelt love feelings make this poem very romantic, Ravi. You paint the perfect background in which to express your emotions. #7 // paul Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 11/11/2015 9:07:00 AM Ravi, you have out-done yourself with this exquisitely beautiful, romantic piece! BRAVO! Pandita Login to Reply

Afolabi Muideen Date: 11/8/2015 11:54:00 PM This is a very beautiful and touching write. Excellent one........A.M. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/11/2015 1:38:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/4/2015 11:41:00 PM such a sweet and loving write ~Luv Linda Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/11/2015 1:38:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/4/2015 12:12:00 AM Ravi, moving and pretty imageries here... =`) thanks for sharing, i enjoyed the read.. -~Olive Eloisa =`) Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/11/2015 1:37:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated.

Len Gasun Date: 11/3/2015 9:56:00 AM Such a very sweet and very beautiful romantic poem this is my dear friend, Ravi. I'm so glad and grateful that i stopped by here tonight to read this precious gem of yours. Thank you so much for sharing! God bless. love lots and big hug, Leonora Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/11/2015 1:37:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend Leonora. Appreciated. Hugs xxxx

Afolabi Muideen Date: 10/29/2015 4:31:00 AM Your write seem voluptuously touched heart....wow! What a romantic and seductive piece. Brilliant one...........A.M. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/11/2015 1:36:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated. Ravi Sathasivam Date: 11/11/2015 1:07:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/28/2015 6:42:00 PM this is really descriptive, Ravi. I would just say, it's enough to say : Let my love clutch you... instead of clutches with you. Beautiful poem. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/29/2015 2:45:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. I agree with your point. Appreciated. Hugs and lovexxxx

Cherl Dunn Date: 10/28/2015 3:40:00 PM Dear Ravi This is piece is like a gentle breeze flowing from within your inner soul, beautifully written and it flows flawlessly onto the page, bravo, you have a great inspirational talent, and this work of poetry shows it at it's best, I'm glad I stopped by today and read this work, it's romantic feeling is softly wind swept, again great job, and thank you for your words and comments on my poetry as well, you have a nice week ahead, cheryl Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/29/2015 2:46:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Appreciated.

Tim Smith Date: 10/28/2015 1:24:00 PM Very beautiful and soft piece. I really love how it flows. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/29/2015 2:46:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Appreciated.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/28/2015 11:53:00 AM What a romantic song of love has your heart written dear Ravi! Loved it! A seven from me my friend! Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/29/2015 2:47:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Appreciated.

Paul Callus Date: 10/28/2015 9:42:00 AM A most lovely poem filled with rich romantic imagery, Ravi! Top marks to you. ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/29/2015 2:47:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my dear friend. Appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/28/2015 7:10:00 AM - Dear Ravi, this is a beautiful love song - Always a joy to read your loving lines :) - Best wishes for a great week - of course an seven :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/28/2015 8:46:00 AM Thank you very much for your lovely comment. Appreciated. Love, hugs and kisses xxxxxx - ravi