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Let My Love Clutches With You

Let my love clutch you....... When the full moon spark its brightness on earth When the silent ocean waves throw its sand onto the shore When all those seagulls hover in the sky When the lovely night brings you close to me Let my love clutch with you with my deep feelings When the lighthouse light guides all those sail boats at the sea When the sound of music is passes us in the air When the cool breeze dances in the mountain's valleys When the mid night flowers throw their fragrances Let my love clutch with you with my deep feelings. When your body touches my heart When my heart gets into your soul When our love set free to recover all those lost memories When your grace so great and your beauty shown vast Let my love clutch with you with my deep feelings. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @2014 Ravi Sathasivam

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Date: 10/29/2014 12:53:00 AM
this is so beautiful, RAvi. Only one little thing is the verb in your title. I would say: let my love clutch you. (using clutches does not work when you are using "let" in front of it). Other than that, superb!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/12/2014 1:57:00 AM
Thank your very much for your comment Andrea. Appreciated. Thanks for your correction and its done. Hugs
Date: 10/27/2014 6:24:00 PM
Very lovely romantic piece my dear friend! And thank you so much for commenting on a couple of my poems. Much appreciated indeed! ;) love and light! xxxx D.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/12/2014 2:00:00 AM
Thank your very much for your comment.Appreciated
Date: 10/27/2014 2:07:00 PM
Ahh!! Romantic work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your presence is appreciated..Sara
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/12/2014 2:00:00 AM
Thank your very much for your comment.Appreciated
Date: 10/27/2014 1:01:00 PM
Sorry I almost forgot thank you for your great comment on my poetry, I appreicate it alot cheri
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/12/2014 2:01:00 AM
Welcome
Date: 10/27/2014 12:59:00 PM
Ravi, This is simply beautiful and the verses and lines melt so well with each other, great flow of poetry, cheri
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/12/2014 2:01:00 AM
Thank your very much for your comment.Appreciated
Date: 10/27/2014 11:36:00 AM
You put this poem in a pretty way.A fine creation dear poet Ravi.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/12/2014 2:02:00 AM
Thank your very much for your comment.Appreciated
Date: 10/27/2014 4:43:00 AM
- Much appreciated your beautiful poem, Ravi !! - lovely new week :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 11/12/2014 2:02:00 AM
Thank your very much for your comment.Appreciated

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