Ravi Sathasivam Poet Light Verse

Let My Love Clutches With You

Let my love clutch you.......

When the full moon spark its brightness on earth
When the silent ocean waves throw its sand onto the shore
When all those seagulls hover in the sky
When the lovely night brings you close to me
Let my love clutch with you with my deep feelings

When the lighthouse light guides all those sail boats at the sea
When the sound of music is passes us in the air
When the cool breeze dances in the mountain's valleys
When the mid night flowers throw their fragrances
Let my love clutch with you with my deep feelings.

When your body touches my heart
When my heart gets into your soul
When our love set free to recover all those lost memories
When your grace so great and your beauty shown vast
Let my love clutch with you with my deep feelings.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
All rights are reserved @2014 Ravi Sathasivam

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Andrea Dietrich October 29, 2014 at 12:53 AM this is so beautiful, RAvi. Only one little thing is the verb in your title. I would say: let my love clutch you. (using clutches does not work when you are using "let" in front of it). Other than that, superb! Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2014 at 1:57 AM Thank your very much for your comment Andrea. Appreciated. Thanks for your correction and its done. Hugs

Dorian Petersen Potter October 27, 2014 at 6:24 PM Very lovely romantic piece my dear friend! And thank you so much for commenting on a couple of my poems. Much appreciated indeed! ;) love and light! xxxx D. Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2014 at 2:00 AM Thank your very much for your comment.Appreciated

Sara Kendrick October 27, 2014 at 2:07 PM Ahh!! Romantic work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your presence is appreciated..Sara Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2014 at 2:00 AM Thank your very much for your comment.Appreciated

Cherl Dunn October 27, 2014 at 1:01 PM Sorry I almost forgot thank you for your great comment on my poetry, I appreicate it alot cheri Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2014 at 2:01 AM Welcome

Cherl Dunn October 27, 2014 at 12:59 PM Ravi, This is simply beautiful and the verses and lines melt so well with each other, great flow of poetry, cheri Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2014 at 2:01 AM Thank your very much for your comment.Appreciated

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen October 27, 2014 at 11:36 AM You put this poem in a pretty way.A fine creation dear poet Ravi. Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2014 at 2:02 AM Thank your very much for your comment.Appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2014 at 4:43 AM - Much appreciated your beautiful poem, Ravi !! - lovely new week :) - // Anne-Lise :) Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2014 at 2:02 AM Thank your very much for your comment.Appreciated