Ravi Sathasivam Poet Light Verse

Let My Country Awake

Let my country awake..............

When the mind is set without fear
When the word speaks without lie
When the heart is free from dirt
When the knowledge earns without waste
When the hatredness dies without curse
When the love lives without trouble
When the freedom showers without crush
When the nature hugs without anger
When the heaven throws its blessing without limit
When the silent march forward to the freedom
Let my country awake. 

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Rizwana Bhurani April 4, 2016 at 9:35 AM Marvellous......let the country come true.....good day

Cherie Thomas October 25, 2013 at 7:27 AM Excellent write Ravi, I so feel these words. Onelove ~<3~ cherie

Gerald Kithinji July 31, 2013 at 3:44 PM And stay awake! Loved this one, Ravi.

Lucilla Carrillo July 26, 2013 at 9:12 PM A good write. I think all countries should wake up. One day I hope it happens. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla Ravi Sathasivam July 29, 2013 at 1:34 AM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated

Manel Gunatillake July 26, 2013 at 9:57 AM Ravi i need to live to see that comes true. Revolution! revolution! Lord Buddha and Our Savior should be here now. good time needy wish! Thank you. Ravi Sathasivam July 29, 2013 at 1:35 AM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated

Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2013 at 10:38 PM wow! Ravi, your words are powerful... freedom will speak ... LINDA Ravi Sathasivam July 29, 2013 at 1:35 AM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen July 23, 2013 at 1:44 AM Hi Ravi, a bit different poems from you. - Desire for freedom, honesty and good hearts is something that I wish for everyone. - Everyone has the right to have opinions, but no one has the right to violence or war. - A very good poem my friend! - Have a beautiful day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Ravi Sathasivam July 29, 2013 at 1:35 AM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated

Andrea Dietrich July 23, 2013 at 12:10 AM Praise for your strong emotion for your country. I second that emotion!! Ravi Sathasivam July 29, 2013 at 1:35 AM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated