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Let Me Show You My World.....

Take My Hand in yours, Lets Run in Green lushed Fields, Lets go canooing ,rafting in Rivers, lets swim naked in Crystalline Streams, Lets walk in Gold Fairy forests,Pen poetry, Write a Love Story,called 'The Poet and Me'. Lets have a picnic under the shade of tall trees, Lets Smell the Freshness of Wet Velvet Leaves, Lets follow the path,Climb up the Highest Mountains, Lets reach the Grey Smoke,the tent at the peaks. Lets lie down on Rich Reddish Silky Brown Soil, Lets watch the Healing Spring ,steaming and boil, Lets make love On a Carpet Of Coloured Flowers, Lets here the Sweet Sound Of Bells,Ding Dong Hours. Lets rest On an Ivory Hammock,swinging in breeze, lets drink the Sweetest Honey of Bees. Lets play in the Snow,Lets bask in the Sun, Lets take a journey, to My World of fun. Lets go over the Rainbow, Get lost in Our Fantasies, Lets open Our wings,fly On White Cotton Clouds Puffy Dreams. Lets Open the padlock,to my Secret Magical Land, Lets escape to the place Of Eden,Just hold On to my Hand. Let Me Show You My World,Let Me take you with Me. I've got a locket ,and inside there's a Unique Silver Key. Charma

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Date: 1/31/2010 7:18:00 AM
Lead me to this world, for Shangri-La does exist, awesome write Charmaine >> James
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Date: 1/30/2010 9:15:00 AM
Wonderful write, as always. David
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Date: 1/28/2010 10:04:00 AM
Beautiful absolutely beautiful life Charma. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/28/2010 6:20:00 AM
Beautiful world here Miss the rafting on rivers...perfect way to spend a hot summers day...has memories flooding me right now...TAH
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Date: 1/28/2010 3:15:00 AM
Lovely poem, Charma! Your world seems to be unique. Thank you for sharing it with us. And thank you for commenting "Rescue of Dreams"...Gert
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Date: 1/28/2010 12:48:00 AM
Enjoyable poem, it makes someone wish. great.
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Date: 1/28/2010 12:38:00 AM
A great place to be Charma.Like the kyrielle flavour.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 1/27/2010 10:22:00 PM
Charma, Your world sounds so inviting. Can't go with you though. I'm still stuck in this bed with tubes in and out. This poem was a beautiful and all too brief escape. Excellent as always. Love, Will
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Date: 1/27/2010 10:08:00 PM
Imaginative and fun to read, Charma. It's like one of those "I remember" poems where you can start each line for nostalgia with I remember. Only here you are doing Let's , which inspires fantasy. Thanks for reading my sonnet. I have hundreds of them and love so much doing a sonnet. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/27/2010 9:56:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem Charma...would be wonderful to do these things wouldn't it? Marty
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Date: 1/27/2010 6:57:00 PM
Wow! What a world Charma! Taking a trip and never leaving the farm is what reading this is like! enjoyed Thanks for your comments. _Robert
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Date: 1/27/2010 6:09:00 PM
Sooooooooooo inviting. john h loving iii
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