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Let Me Into Your Heart

I fell in love the first time I saw you, you were the sexiest woman I'd seen. And I knew that my heart had to pursue this angel, but you quickly fled the scene. Like magic, you found a way to disappear, I looked, but you were nowhere to be found. And I could feel the trickle of a tear running down my cheek, then onto the ground. But suddenly, you were in front of me, and your sweet smile brought a smile to my lips. For you were the key that set my heart free, with cerulean eyes and swinging hips. And before you had a chance to depart, I begged you to let me into your heart. (Sonnet) 8/18/2017
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Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 9:00 PM
Innocent and lovely, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 7:35 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Kimathi Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 8:47 AM
The quote pic and your poem blend so warmly and nicely together. Congrats Emile, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
Pinet Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 9:30 AM
Thanks Teddy, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 5:23 PM
Wow, it is even judged already? I wrote mine late last night but failed to type it up. I was wanting to do that in the morning and had no time to. So I lost out on the whole contest. Your entry is a beautiful winner. Congratulations.
Pinet Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 9:13 AM
Thanks Andrea, it's a shame yours wasn't in time... I think we've all been there, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 6:58 AM
I am back to say congratulations for your win in the contest! yay!
Pinet Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 7:24 AM
Thanks Heidi, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Pandit Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 6:31 AM
Congrats Emile on your win!
Pinet Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 7:25 AM
Thanks Vijay, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Wood Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 10:39 PM
This is wonderful Emile. This poem and others like it are why you are one of my "favorites" here in the soup. Good luck with this beautiful entry.
Pinet Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 8:36 AM
Thank you so much Dean, your comments and support mean a lot to me my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 1:17 PM
Very nice Emile. The ending is powerful about begging to be let into her heart :) Good luck in the contest!
Pinet Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 6:38 PM
Thanks Heidi, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
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