Let Me Into Your Heart

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I fell in love the first time I saw you, you were the sexiest woman I'd seen. And I knew that my heart had to pursue this angel, but you quickly fled the scene. Like magic, you found a way to disappear, I looked, but you were nowhere to be found. And I could feel the trickle of a tear running down my cheek, then onto the ground. But suddenly, you were in front of me, and your sweet smile brought a smile to my lips. For you were the key that set my heart free, with cerulean eyes and swinging hips. And before you had a chance to depart, I begged you to let me into your heart. (Sonnet) 8/18/2017

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/26/2018 9:00:00 PM

Innocent and lovely, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/27/2018 7:35:00 AM

Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/29/2017 8:47:00 AM

The quote pic and your poem blend so warmly and nicely together. Congrats Emile, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/29/2017 9:30:00 AM

Thanks Teddy, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2017 5:23:00 PM

Wow, it is even judged already? I wrote mine late last night but failed to type it up. I was wanting to do that in the morning and had no time to. So I lost out on the whole contest. Your entry is a beautiful winner. Congratulations.

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/22/2017 9:13:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, it's a shame yours wasn't in time... I think we've all been there, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.