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I am gasping for air As my lungs fill with love My heart starts to race Then takes flight like a dove Throw me a lifesaver I can't help but to drown To give him my whole self To let my walls down I shudder when i think Of his kiss of his touch Want him to devour me Need him so much Lay by my side And never get up Let us spend our days Gorging on love's cup Let me caress your body Tantalize you upon my bed Allow me to go off of impulse And make your eyes roll in the back of your head!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/13/2013 4:01:00 PM
I have done a few love poems, mostly my older posted ones. First signs of love and wish are my two most viewed poems and are villanelles. I also have an older one called your eyes, sweet pleasure, and probably a few mixed in. I like the view of love here, the complete giving of oneself to the other. Nice work.
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April Mitchell
Date: 8/14/2013 12:00:00 AM
why thank you bunches Mr.Bunches!lol i'll check some out
Date: 8/8/2013 7:43:00 PM
Another love poet I see, well good job with this one! Think I'm going to check out your other work.... MC
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April Mitchell
Date: 8/8/2013 7:52:00 PM
well i am glad you enjoy my work!
Date: 8/6/2013 4:51:00 AM
Words used in such a way to convey the passion, good job
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April Mitchell
Date: 8/6/2013 12:17:00 PM
thank you glad you liked!

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