Kristina Whitmore Poet Rhyme

Let Loose

Loudly lashing to make a claim

Rolling constantly raving for ways

Returning to recoil at thoughts

The ones and moments lost



Raging refusing to comprehend words

Silently sheltering of heartaches curse

Sight seen envisioning not worse

A life without denying our hurt

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James Inman November 21, 2017 at 4:31 AM Nice write Kristina. Kristina Whitmore November 23, 2017 at 10:38 PM Thank you James for your comment! Hope you are having a great holiday.

Line Gauthier November 10, 2017 at 10:31 PM Congrats, Kristina. Kristina Whitmore November 11, 2017 at 1:06 AM Thanks! :-)

Gregory Richard Barden November 10, 2017 at 7:29 PM Very thoughtful and emotional, Kristina, I enjoyed the many layers of this ... congrats on your win, my friend! :-) <3 Kristina Whitmore November 10, 2017 at 10:08 PM Appreciate the congratulations and thank you for taking the time to enjoy a different poetic form I tried.

Winged Warrior November 10, 2017 at 5:59 PM Congrats!!! Kristina...beautiful write...god bless...^WW^ Kristina Whitmore November 10, 2017 at 10:06 PM Thank you for the blessing and comment. :-)

Kim Rodrigues November 10, 2017 at 5:49 PM Congrats Kristina! Kristina Whitmore November 10, 2017 at 10:05 PM Thank you. :-)