Louisa Estrada Poet I do not know?

Let It Show

Look into my eyes and see
           My pain for what it is
           No lies i hold beneath my skin
           I cry so silent you rarely see, what in the world is wrong with me
           Take it in, let it out
           Wondering in shallow Doubt.....

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Mike Wallentin February 26, 2011 at 3:59 AM Pain circles in the same way in my eyes as in your, we all just hold different cracks.. We will get by

Robert Pettit February 14, 2011 at 10:51 AM Welcome to the site. I know you will like it here. This is not bad for a first submission. You have decent descriptiveness in your six submitted lines.

Gwendolen Song February 14, 2011 at 9:11 AM Thanks for sharing your emotions thru poetry. Good medicine for the aching heart.