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Let It Show

Look into my eyes and see My pain for what it is No lies i hold beneath my skin I cry so silent you rarely see, what in the world is wrong with me Take it in, let it out Wondering in shallow Doubt.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/26/2011 3:59:00 AM
Pain circles in the same way in my eyes as in your, we all just hold different cracks.. We will get by
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Date: 2/14/2011 10:51:00 AM
Welcome to the site. I know you will like it here. This is not bad for a first submission. You have decent descriptiveness in your six submitted lines.
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Date: 2/14/2011 9:11:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your emotions thru poetry. Good medicine for the aching heart.
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