Quateria Greene Poet Blitz

Let It Rise

I remember the times we had was like the best laughs
  I remember the mistakes we wore it made us last
   I remember the hard times could put us past 
     you could only be you in a presence of mass 
  less complications when we had each others back 
         last but not least we walked in a pack. 

                 -Quateria Greene

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Valerie Staton March 1, 2019 at 12:03 AM Beautifully written!

Valerie Staton February 28, 2019 at 11:54 PM Nicely written rhyme!

Valerie Staton February 28, 2019 at 11:28 PM Wonderful imagery you have applied to this poem! I enjoyed reading. Love the line "My heart, like a bird on an icy bough, will immerse in that moment..."

Valerie Staton February 28, 2019 at 11:15 PM Memories... I enjoyed reading this poem! Take care!