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Barbara Gorelick

Let It Rain



drought
dry mouth
wanting green
just the waiting
tears

wind
blowing
old curtains
the scent of rain
hope


Barbara Gorelick
For the Turn on The Lanterne contest

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2011

hopepeoplelanterne

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September 10, 2011 at 4:09 PM

Enjoyed reading this winning work..Congrats..Sara

Lori Lucas Mcclure

September 9, 2011 at 8:33 AM

Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!!---Lori

September 8, 2011 at 5:15 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Barabara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 8, 2011 at 4:09 PM

Congrats BG on your wonderful win with this awesome Lanterne poetry luv..

September 8, 2011 at 2:03 PM

Beautiful Lanterne Barbara!Congrats on your win!

September 8, 2011 at 10:54 AM

Congratulations Barbara. Nice piece

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 8, 2011 at 8:16 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Turn On The Lanterne" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

September 8, 2011 at 4:59 AM

Barbara , congrats on your great win..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 7, 2011 at 8:50 AM

Wishing you the best in the contest Barbara. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2011 at 10:48 PM

VERY nice. Love the way you made it about the desire for rain and the hope in the scent of rain.

September 6, 2011 at 8:57 PM

nice.. never disappointed when i visit here. happy eve, Barbara :) ~N

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