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Let It Leak

You work on the dam wall, As the pressure builds up behind it. Fearful of letting anything be exposed, You patch every potential leak. But when the dam gets too frail and ruptures, You’ll see how strong you are As the all of the contents leak out and Show the world your true strength.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/22/2015 4:06:00 PM
A crack in the dam begets another.... A great write Tasha! Keith:-)
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Date: 5/3/2015 3:41:00 AM
YOUR AMAZING I LOVE THIS POEM FILLED WITH SO MANY GREAT EMOTIONS i respect what you wanted to show thanks for reading my pomes and thanks for the suggestions love yay have a nice day aashi....
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Date: 5/6/2015 3:30:00 PM
Aarushi, thank you so much for your comment! <3 Tash
Date: 5/2/2015 12:26:00 AM
Very nice! You've said so much here and it is with depth and insight some never even come close to. Great write and greatly done! A 7 God bless. Ed
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Date: 5/6/2015 3:29:00 PM
Thank you so much! It took me forever to get the wording right. <3 Tash
Date: 5/1/2015 8:38:00 AM
A poem of encouragement; so true.
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Date: 5/6/2015 3:28:00 PM
Thank you so much!!! <3 Tash
Date: 4/30/2015 7:54:00 AM
a7, great wisdom in this poem. Enjoyed reading this one this fine morn.
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Date: 4/30/2015 3:34:00 PM
Thank you so much! <3 Tash

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