Wilma Neels Poet Light Verse

Let It Go, Mr. Ego!!

I gave you my time
I wanted to make you mine
I gave you my heart
you tore it apart, 

my love you rejected
my tears you ignored
desires and needs
expelled from your thoughts,

it’s all about you
all about what you want
your wishes take priority
just like your ego, gets superiority…

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Poet Destroyer A July 11, 2010 at 10:27 PM this tittle got my attention,,wow males are just imposibleeeee,,lol..on my #oi King Mandalay poem did you notice how i did not forget to mention his ego,,.well it was the last set of couplets..i really enjoyed this poem,,,going to my favorites,,well we women have ego's to,,,later,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich July 10, 2010 at 8:25 AM Hi, there, Wilma. I enjoyed this one. Thanks as ever for your reading my poems. Luv, Andrea

Audrey Haick July 7, 2010 at 7:45 AM The stumbling block in men's path...excellent write, WIlma. To the point and with great flow! Peace, love, Audrey

Carl Harris July 7, 2010 at 6:21 AM This is a very well written and expressed poem, Wilma, and though of only three verses, it gets it's point across exceptionally well to the reader. Great write! Thanks for your kind comments on my recent poem. Carl.

Anthony Nutter July 7, 2010 at 3:20 AM The male ego, such a fragile thing. Funny write put a smile on my face.