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Let It Go, Mr. Ego!!

I gave you my time I wanted to make you mine I gave you my heart you tore it apart, my love you rejected my tears you ignored desires and needs expelled from your thoughts, it’s all about you all about what you want your wishes take priority just like your ego, gets superiority…

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2010 10:27:00 PM

this tittle got my attention,,wow males are just imposibleeeee,,lol..on my #oi King Mandalay poem did you notice how i did not forget to mention his ego,,.well it was the last set of couplets..i really enjoyed this poem,,,going to my favorites,,well we women have ego's to,,,later,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2010 8:25:00 AM

Hi, there, Wilma. I enjoyed this one. Thanks as ever for your reading my poems. Luv, Andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 7/7/2010 7:45:00 AM

The stumbling block in men's path...excellent write, WIlma. To the point and with great flow! Peace, love, Audrey

Carl Harris

Date: 7/7/2010 6:21:00 AM

This is a very well written and expressed poem, Wilma, and though of only three verses, it gets it's point across exceptionally well to the reader. Great write! Thanks for your kind comments on my recent poem. Carl.

Anthony Nutter

Date: 7/7/2010 3:20:00 AM

The male ego, such a fragile thing. Funny write put a smile on my face.