Let It Be

My heart was hearty
I held my hopes high
I was geared to go far,
But hit a pothole instead
and got stuck with a flat –
It could have been worse;

Let it be, my dear
Fight Karma no more.

I spread love all around
I smiled and shared my joy
But someone broke my heart,
Slighted me and made me cry –
It could have been worse;

Let it be, my dear
Fight Karma no more.

I had my eyes set on spring,
Clear blue sky and balmy breeze,
But it’s fall – chilly, bare and gray,
and the winter’s waiting in the wings –
It could have been worse;

Let it be, my dear
Fight Karma no more!



~Karma contest by Line Gauthier
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Haight Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Much wisdom in your well-written poem, Abdul. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
Carber Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 2:11 PM
Congrats Abdul, and you're right: fighting karma is like fighting God, it can only end one way.
Gentry Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 8:17 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well-written verses with wise advice. Enjoyed reading.
Gauthier Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 5:17 PM
I enjoyed your humour and the presentation and form of this poem. I love your let it be attitude. Congrats on your win, Abdul.
Onclaud Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 4:11 PM
yes, let karma flow so we erase all karmic debts, abdul... great job!..huggs
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