Let In the Light

I’ve been trying to dispel    shivers of grey
For today    there is beating of wings towards me
And I’m surrounded in suffocating bits    of uncertainty

Seeing dark in the quotidian shadows      calling out names
I cry meritorious     to change the ominous forms lent
Instead to see them dancing    gossamery    friends

I see the welcome spill      in amber dulcet light
Glinting star wishes   tapping upon my scared shoulder
Teasing effervescence   softens    my dark horizon shinning

Bodies swaying          as does a palm frond wave    with grace
I tiptoe across the bridge to grab     onto offered hands 
Feel the dark tumble-down    cobweb crusted steps

As day break beckons     in a crystalline perfect rose
The morning now    to measure    with uplifted glad heart
Fear not the solitude     enfolded within      but rejoice the day


1st Place
Brians select 8   June 8  2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/8/2020 9:01:00 PM
John, that is probably one of the nicest things for a poet to hear, that their words made a difference and resonated with someone. Thank you so much. xoxo
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Date: 6/8/2020 3:04:00 PM
Jeanne, thank you for teaching me my word for the day (quotidian) and for blessing my morning with this scintillating read. "Rejoice the day" is going to be on my mind all day. Let the light shout down the shadows of uncertainty. I needed this today. Thank you and congrats on your #1 placement with Brian! Hugs ~ John
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