Let Go of To Get To

as we float and gloat in destiny’s moat fears and desires as we quote and unquote in trance altering not our piquant circumstance although plunging into the void is our only chance being not a rebel, a nerd, we follow the herd blindly aping scriptures word for word we remain lost in labyrinths of lower mind trauma bonding therein fear grips us in a bind finding our life adrift, if we choose we can yet shift to reclaim within heart, love and light as a gift enlivening feeble form with currents warm in time becoming the very bliss storm

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Date: 10/18/2023 11:55:00 AM
Hello UnseekingSeeker, i do agree with you. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/19/2023 10:51:00 AM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, You are welcome my blessed friend. Blessing my friend. /Darlene\
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/18/2023 5:32:00 PM
Thank you, dear Darlene
Date: 10/18/2023 7:14:00 AM
I am loving your rhymes and wordplay and also your use of alliterations in this! So seamless and deeply meaningful profound truths delivered in such eloquence! Love this
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Date: 10/18/2023 8:52:00 AM
Thank you, IE
Date: 10/18/2023 1:49:00 AM
Love (agape) is always our main aim. Blessings
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/18/2023 8:53:00 AM
Yes of course, by love, agape love is what is meant, all embracing, unconditional.
Date: 10/17/2023 9:38:00 PM
To reclaim within heart love and light as gift. I love that. Love what you have to say. Write on!
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Date: 10/18/2023 8:53:00 AM
Thank you, Karen
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