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Let Go

Scribbled notes, of times gone by, Memories held to make you cry. Forgotten dreams, now nightmares surround, Fallen footsteps, don't make a sound. Hopes perished, washed up on the sand, Shattered from a war torn land. Fallen comrades, drive lives insane, Forever carrying the eternal flame. Holding on, don't let go, There's love out there, still on show. Bury the past, not to be forgotten, The whole world isn't rotten.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/24/2016 7:44:00 AM
War is a horrible thing! I can't imagine what it would be like. I see your pen is flowing well today Kay.! Good stuff!
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Kay Roberts
Date: 10/24/2016 7:49:00 AM
Oh Rick. Your comments always put a smile on my face. Thank you. I couldn't begin to imagine the atrocities of war, even with the images we see on the TV. I just try my best to channel my emotions to what a person could possibly be feeling.

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