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Let Down Again

She sits and ponders In the summer shade Wondering on Decisions she's made To turn away Her man, her life No longer her wish To be his wife Under the greened leafed tree In her silky dress Thinking back on her past Her life a mess Let down so much By the man she loved No longer the couple Like a hand in a glove Decision made She's on her way This girl stays single No marriage today http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life.php

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Jayne Eggins

Date: 7/14/2009 10:41:00 AM

this is so sad nearly made me cry ! LOL but beautiful poignant words from you this drips sadness ... Love Jayne x x

Steve Meadows

Date: 7/11/2009 1:40:00 PM

this is really good. check out some of mine

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/11/2009 4:26:00 AM

This story from one poem to another keeps the reader wanting to read whats next--if he let her down than there's no one to blame except himself,anyway its always men who play the Baddo-kidding James-;)he should win here heart back...maybe in the next poem...you should write a book my friend,great romantic write--charma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2009 1:13:00 PM

I love this writing. Sounds like she has made the right decision and is moving on. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/10/2009 12:29:00 PM

This is so sad, James. Sometimes we "turn away" even though there is nowhere to turn to. If this is a true story, I can only hope the woman in this poem finds love again. Life seems so empty without it. Beautiful words! Love, Carolyn