Let

Let me bleed
Let me cry
Let me die
Then let me do it all over again,
For the thing that you consider , 
Freedom is just a design waiting to be built by me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 6:16 AM
You have presented to us very interesting poetry today Guy. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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February 16, 2010 at 11:06 AM
Wow! This poem came with many differant point of views and meaning behind it. Such a powerful write for only a handful of lines! Congrats:) Keep writing as I shall always read! ALways with love, ~Catherine
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February 16, 2010 at 10:55 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned. Sara
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