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Character mellows down As time moves on It goes up and up it never loosens Sometimes, down and down it drowns Ascent is rare but it takes also descent When you have reached top it prints a dent In life, remember Humans drift once in a while And while the balance beam You can’t get condone Maybe reprieve, censure and triumph But, don’t ever miss a stone unturned Lessons of life is rather fine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 5/31/2012 6:32:00 AM
I have not been on the soup for almost a week to read and comment. I have enjoyed being able to read your poetry this morning. I wanted to stop by to thank you for the comments you made during my absence from the soup. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment Dalila. Love, Carol"
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Date: 1/24/2012 11:55:00 AM
An enchanting poem reflecting your deep insight into the mysteries of life. I am deeply impressed. Thanks, Dalila, for your appreciative comments on my poem New Year. I am so pleased. -Mohammad
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Date: 1/22/2012 5:56:00 AM
very lovely Dalila.......patrick
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Date: 1/21/2012 11:54:00 PM
Hi! Dalila, My mind body and soul are still passing through all of life's lesson.. i will be fine... enjoyed your poem,,...thank you for sharing,, forever & ever,.. PD
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