Lesson From Woman

-First episode

Gloom but mute
Dark in eyes where was flame
And my wife whom I thought
I keep out of storm
She asked me
Oh sweet heart where is your glow
In murmuring sound I said
I am OK just to save you
Baby
I try to keep the gale out of wall
In her soft sound but firm she told
Baby you already brought in
Bring your shine back and talk
Share with me baby your obscurity
And I will be secure
Open your heart release your load
Thanks my sweet heart
I am free and no more gloom
In my house
No effort like open heart in love

That lesson learned
For woman I love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 12, 2013 at 11:57 AM
Deep poem, Sallum. Indeed, a lesson only a woman could provide. Enjoyable poem. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like.
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