"less To Carry"

My shoulders are tired
of carrying so much grief
from a long hard week..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 3:35 PM
Been there done that so looking for the weekend to rest and relax...Good to be in a job that one can do that...Your comments were so encouraging ...I am glad that you went back to see some of my older ones..I am looking forward to that heavenly home for sure..Sara
Fraser Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 1:35 PM
These long hard weeks make us stronger Michael, as long as we realise that the strength is there. I like the tad of wisdom in this Haiku >> James
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 5:17 PM
I can really relate to this one. ALL TOO WELL. Thanks for your sweet comments on the poems of mine you read. LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 12:11 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Michael. Please continue you keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 6:50 AM
It will take time Michael, remember He will not test you beyond your ability.. bb always Wilma
A   Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 5:01 PM
wow,, deep write,, a grief which seems to pain,, enjoyed the write...P.D.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 3:50 PM
Its just the reality of it all.. W.K. ... that is the new adjustment for life now.. with luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 3:49 PM
Then rest Michael and u will be energized and your mind enlightened to continue to thrill us all with your words and poetry ..with luv..
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