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Sept- 26- 2025

Less Said Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Hilo Poet

~ Placed Second in the Premiere Contest~

Less Said

cerulean vastness stretching,
above and below.
mountainous ridge,
a cutting knife.
on jutting dock,
serenity broods.

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2025

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Andrea Dietrich

October 9, 2025 at 6:52 PM

Beautiful!

William Kelii Kekaula

September 29, 2025 at 11:17 AM

Mountains with a knife, penetrating words, beautifully executed. Mahalo, for this amazing entry, and what a picture! Aloha, my friend.

September 30, 2025 at 1:09 AM

Thank you so much dear Hilo poet. Your comment has delighted me greatly. Aloha !

Krishnanand Guptar

September 29, 2025 at 8:14 AM

Congratulations, Valsa, on your win in this contest with a short poem with lovely imagery delicately crafted, where serenity prevails. Wishing you a serene day..

September 29, 2025 at 2:58 AM

Back with hearty congratulations on your podium win, dear Valsa.

September 28, 2025 at 5:32 AM

You are so right, there is a knife edge where the mountain and its reflection bisect. Nice, J :)

September 27, 2025 at 8:09 AM

Your poem beautifully embraces simplicity... an outstanding submission for the contest... it truly showcases your unique artistic style.

Andrea Dietrich

September 26, 2025 at 9:22 PM

Excellent job.

sara Etgen-Baker

September 26, 2025 at 4:48 PM

less is beautiful with this poem....excellent contest entry....this poem exemplies your poetic voice--love it :-) hugs, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

September 26, 2025 at 11:42 AM

"Less Said" is a wonderful write. I love your Pretty Picture... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away..........

Dr. Vandana Sharma

September 26, 2025 at 8:20 AM

Wow!!so much is being said in such a few words. All the best for the contest.

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