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Less Critical Acclaim

pretentiously lame altruistically tame boringly aflame creativity a shame dull tanka ends much the same Bite Size Poem no.37 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier HMS 5/7/5/7/7 22/02/22

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 2/23/2022 5:58:00 PM

David Sounds to me like Pop It has and always will have an audience in particular the young Bring temporary fame and fortune But ends up much the same dull

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/24/2022 2:39:00 AM

That’s certainly one way of looking at this one Christopher, maybe subconsciously it’s what I meant, but on the surface it’s more a wordplay, great to see your back in the game, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/23/2022 1:51:00 PM

You packed a lot into this short verse David, a form I haven't yet tried. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/23/2022 2:16:00 PM

Usually Tom when my brain cells won’t fire, I default to the tanka, gives that little bit extra wriggle room thank the senryus, thanks very much for stopping by, cheers David

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/23/2022 6:58:00 AM

Wow!David, You've penned such a well-written tanka for the contest. And it's in monorhyme too? Eye-catching title and content.Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis"

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/23/2022 8:18:00 AM

Thank you again Alexis, I just done a little retouch on this one, maybe on second glance it’s worthy of your critical acclaim lol, cheers David