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What if all hope was lost
The frightened child never comforted
The desperate suicidal teen toes gripped on the riverbank
Broken splintered lives eager for the end
i look deep into the abyss as it falls into me
No one knows i have no hope
I walk amongst the dead shadows
My pretence on my face
Inside upon a smoothened rock 
Spot light from above
crushed and withered
hope crumbles and carried on the wind 
is gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/1/2018 5:45:00 AM
When hope is lost, all is lost sadly... Worry ends when faith begins... Well expressed Christopher...
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Christopher Quigley
Date: 6/1/2018 6:50:00 AM
Not sure if that is true a good man without hope can still be a good man

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