Leo Memories

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it was summer and
mother had been busy
in the kitchen all day
making a fancy dinner
and custom birthday cake

year after year
it never got old
but I soon would ~
anticipation giving way
to fond memories



(Leo in title references the zodiac sign)

AP: 3rd place 2025

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/18/2025 9:03:00 PM

The title is beyond me. Love the memories though. ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/19/2025 5:25:00 AM

referring to the zodiac sign ~ I added a note.

Jeanette Swan

Date: 3/18/2025 4:04:00 AM

It's funny how you notice you've changed, but can't pinpoint when... which is better, anticipation or memories? I can't pick. J :) P.S. Love the photo - washing that smells like sunshine and roses.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/18/2025 6:23:00 AM

thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment ~

Benjamin Bartley

Date: 3/17/2025 6:14:00 PM

Very nice. Thanks for sharing!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/17/2025 10:26:00 PM

Thanks, Benjamin ~