Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Rhyme

Lenore - Who

She was gone for the week-end, three days without Her
Thinking safety in numbers, I went out with the guys
The Brightness  of her Blue eyes, her Flowing blond hair
My LOVE was out of town, so I really Didn’t Care

Will She LOVE me For the Eons of FOREVER?
    Or will I lose my most PRECIOUS LOVE?

Her Smile enticing, “I’ll Pay you if you buy me a Drink”
My mind was foggy, what could I do, I couldn’t even think
Do I have a Woman that I LOVE Forever? I can’t remember Her name
Lela, Lola, Lois, Lorraine, one more drink I might remember her name

Will She LOVE me For the Eons of FOREVER?
     Or will I lose My Most PRECIOUS LOVE?

Did I ever really LOVE Her?  A name : Lenore, would anyone ever Know?
That I would be Cheating on a Woman ,Where Forever LOVE would Grow
In the Eons of Eternity; my Bride by my side, would my cheatin’ heart glow?
Would my FOREVER and ALWAYS tell me : it is time for YOU to go

Will She LOVE me For the Eons of FOREVER?
     Or will I lose My Most PRECIOUS LOVE?

            Inspired by Paula Swanson, for her Contest  “Cheatin”
Author’s Note : This is  Fiction so I don’t know if it follows her Rules
                       Honorable Mention

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Poet Destroyer A September 24, 2011 at 12:51 AM I'm loving your poetry today, HG:-) Lenore, the joy of wonder in your words..of cunfusion ~. Should you go from your precious love? Love is a cycle that comes with remembrance. Lets share a drink.. and forget all about our cheating eyes,, by morning time you will know the answers to your heart... hehehheh truly enjoyed your wonderful artistic poem. The images run like a play through my mind.. Take care and enjoy ,..LINDA

Raul Moreno June 7, 2011 at 6:15 AM Hello HG and thanks for stopping by. I hope you are doing great and may God's blessings continue to reach you. -R

Dr.Ram Mehta May 23, 2011 at 3:14 PM Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of paula, HG

Joyce Johnson May 23, 2011 at 1:42 PM Congratulations on your placement with this poem HG. Love, Mom

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 23, 2011 at 1:16 PM Congrats HG my silent beau on your HM in Paula's contest with this excellent entry luv.. enjoy your special honor .."Sweetheart" always ..

Carol Sunshine Brown May 23, 2011 at 1:12 PM Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest HG. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor May 23, 2011 at 1:05 PM Congrats, HG. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

Nette Onclaud May 23, 2011 at 10:10 AM HG!! well, i got carried away with your lenore..:)

Nette Onclaud May 23, 2011 at 10:09 AM Kudos to you for the big win,lenore.. huggs

Carolyn Devonshire May 23, 2011 at 9:50 AM HG, I know you'll always love Lenore. Well done! Congratulations on your success in Paula's contest! Love, Carolyn

Cory Long May 22, 2011 at 6:47 PM this is great nicely done..cory

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 22, 2011 at 11:32 AM It is very intense and written very well HG my silent beau and much success in the contest by Paula ... knowing u would never cheat on your precious Lenore ... this piece shows your creative genius in poetry my friend.. wishing u a terrific Sunday as I continue celebrating my birthday which spilled over into today from yesterday.. your "Sweetheart" forever and always with luv..