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Poetic Form: Free Verse/Short Story
Inspired: 2024 July 18
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My short story continues with this insightful excerpt: A Century Turns: Soviet Union's Life Expectancy: II "A fictional perspective of articulating an ambitious nature that hinges on varied facts," ... by the Poet. And now ... the school bell has rung. The park that he pleasures in both muscularity and mentality, ills in parity--in a nutshell--the school has taught him that the eraser is the better half of a pencil. It is always the seldom used that comes to the aid and heals the whole abused. That illuminating factor was his focal point that would encourage his future from the descension of the crown, and to the ascension of communism's embrace.

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Date: 7/19/2024 8:47:00 AM
How much I love: the school has taught him that the eraser is the better half of a pencil!! We think our words are “all it.” Behold the erasure…the peace…the quiet…the astounding sense that life can be “all in.” ((hugs))
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Date: 7/19/2024 10:13:00 AM
Yes, "It is always the seldom used that comes to the aid and heals the whole abused," I just added that wealth of your informative insights Kim, Mahalo my friend, Aloha William

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