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LEGENDARY WORDS

Honey tells me: Where do great stanzas come from
just out of your head when you're in-bed hon
so, they will say your mind went to our library
in books of yesterday you remember legendary words

you serf paragraphs lookin' to catch a rhyming phrase
of yesterday to bring it on your next line today or ways
cleaver enough to fit that new poem piece by piece 
till it is just right to your style a real breeze...

simple rhymes to choose from a vast reservoir 
only in your head all while in bed, furthermore
your poem pieces fit just fine your style for sure...
       indeed, one cool kick ass metaphor
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Greenhough Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 7:55 PM
That's good thoughts. Thinking is better when a person relaxes.
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January 9, 2024 at 3:55 AM
"Thinking is a problem of thought" example: When I was 17 me and my girl drifted apart she went off to college, I started drinkin', smoking, gamblin' then I turned 18 (complete Fantasy) SMILE-Thank you for you time to review my thoughts - Stay safe too! Hilda
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