Legend

LEGEND

we are all legends no matter who we are 
cruising, and confusing ENIGMA to bizarre 
I am a legend, no  need to be a star
I am a legend ,with no need to travel far

In and out like the sun 
I am a legend, I' m not the only one
living this world with one quick run
we are still a legend,  we control the gun 

drinking all the water from the dam
drowning in a lake is what i dram 
a legend I made the river where I swam
after drinking the water from the lamb

legend when our hearts are lost in the ground
legend we become when we are found
legend we are all destine to  bound
legend by the weight of the smallest pound

legend down to the bone
legend even when you're  alone
a legend does not always carry a nice tone
a legend is your name engraved in the stone

by : p.d.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 4/13/2015 1:28:00 PM
Linda, I truly enjoyed reading this. Thank you. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 6/13/2014 9:21:00 AM
I like reading this one again, PD. one that is almost like a song. Just stopping by to say hi,. I wrote a poem for your contest but too rushed to post it yet. Have a great day!!
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Date: 12/20/2012 8:40:00 PM
So true! We're all legends within ourselves. Nicely written!...Milt
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Date: 12/20/2012 5:38:00 PM
great job you are totally a legend on this site lol
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Date: 12/20/2012 12:26:00 AM
Nice read! Love the simplicity
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Date: 12/17/2012 7:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on Soup, PD! Always, Annalise
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Date: 12/17/2012 4:18:00 PM
congradulations on being featured this week. i am a legend for several reasons you only onow of one.
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Date: 12/14/2012 2:13:00 PM
interesting and thought provoking is this poem,, i like this .
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Date: 8/23/2012 10:44:00 AM
You are a Legend to me PD. there are those who would like to be legends, and then there are those who must be, and they fight for it with all their soul magic - you are ablazing my Sphinx! " Legend down to the bone..." awesome!!! with respect - J.A.B. %
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Date: 6/19/2011 4:40:00 AM
I thought this one was about John Legend. Shucks! Joking. Very nice WorddddAGE PD. ...Always comin triple correKt with the flows yo. DiGGin The DuRt yo throwin' Down!
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Date: 7/14/2010 12:26:00 PM
very powerful words, I enjoyed this one! TK
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Date: 7/13/2010 11:05:00 AM
legends can be good or bad some legends like jesus bring an army of love from above. other legends like hitlers,stalins and husseins bring legions of demons and dragons of destruction with them. however, both forces have their places of power in the universe of blessing and cirse
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Date: 6/11/2010 1:53:00 PM
this was a hot one. my heart is still burning. you have a gift for real.
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Date: 6/7/2010 9:34:00 AM
P.D., yes we are! I think when we quite believing we are a legend we may as well hop on in the hole. Thanks for your comments. I really didn't know what to write with, "Yes, we have no Bananas" That was a pretty tough line to put a meaningful poem to. I'm not to happy with the poem but like I said, I tried! YF4L, God Bless, mj
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:26:00 PM
Enjoyed this write. Lot's of wisdom enjoyed in rhyme.
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Date: 5/30/2010 5:05:00 PM
love this 'Jaz'
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Date: 5/27/2010 1:27:00 AM
wow i love the way you have writen this very nice
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Date: 5/13/2010 9:54:00 PM
Wow Wonderful, this is a great write!
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Date: 5/11/2010 9:04:00 AM
beautiful. it flows nicely. keep it up .:The Lost Poet:.
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Date: 5/9/2010 3:19:00 AM
Another splash of beauty in your legend. Great write and very beautifully penned. I am starting a new series from To-day, hope you would like it. Love and best wishes.... Ravindra ... Poet D
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Date: 5/7/2010 5:27:00 PM
this is awesome P.D. just outstanding, i love this write of yours.automatically a favorite.and that is no lie.you are a legend down to the bone and don't you ever forget(: so powerful, i love your writes.and the confusing Enigma to bizarre is wild my friend, my faavvv line.you are too cool, you know. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 5/5/2010 3:14:00 PM
P.D. i am a legend in so many ways my God has made me. with my pen with my voice. with my faith. i may lack in other areas but when dad passed the amount of cards with money in them did say something. jhl
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Date: 5/3/2010 8:07:00 PM
Wow, you have talent. You have a sharp, slashing style it is almost cinematic. It reminds me of the best of Frankenheimer or early Kubrick, not later bloated self important Kubrick, but the brilliant Kubrick of Paths of Glory or Dr. Strangelove or even Lolita. I'm going to read more of your stuff this week. By trhe way, I would love to see you do a verbal give and take between THE two great Batman villains Jack Napier and Harvey Dent. Cackling nihilist versus random revenge.
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Date: 5/3/2010 6:43:00 AM
sad write, reminds me of the movie...
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Date: 5/3/2010 3:41:00 AM
really some thoughts to ponder on with this one, PD--thanks for sharing, friend :)
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