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Legend

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Written: April 1st For Legend Silent One contest Rumi Quote: Don't be satisfied with stories, how things have gone with others. Unfold your own myth.
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Legend whispers airily, of a time gone by, When overwhelming zest, is heavy to deny. Gathered and swirled—an area's embrace, Until that ratling place, met its final trace. Living things, how depressing and bleak. In shadows they dwell, their spirits weak. Existence casts a shadow of fear and strife. Melting light onto the tapestry of life. Legends tell a narrative of mystery and grace. Mysterious spots have secrets,  across space. A game played in shadows and light. A lovely day-night waltz of illusory and might. Oh, to become fulfilled, A journey of the heart, Where dreams and desires are distilled, And life's purpose finds its start. Unpredictable, the outcome lies, A mystery hidden from our eyes. In the realm of uncertainty, dwells, As the hidden tale of destiny tells. Legends never die, heroes are remembered, In tales and songs, their spirits tempered. Through time embrace, their stories thrive, In hearts and minds, they forever strive. Legends, eternal and inspired, Never weary, never retired. Legends, eternal and grand, Never falter, never lose their stand. When legends wither, dreams do fade, No additional greatness in their shade. In every crag and gnarled tree, In every rootless valley, you foresee, Legends, as Haggard, do exist, do overflow Jones, Rumi, and Sinatra: names that dance upon glow A trio of souls, each unique, In their artistry, Rumi poetry may melt souls heartedly. Through every obstacle that may arise, You'll find the strength to reach the skies. With courage and grace, be ready to leap, Over the obstacles that in your path creep. And I ponder what doth set apart, The legends, from the artists of mere heart. Success, oh success, It's all in how you manage, no less. With grace and skill, you must possess.

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Date: 4/10/2024 6:21:00 AM
Sotto, this is a beautiful poem about legends. Impressive. I enjoyed both listening and reading. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/10/2024 4:11:00 AM
Hey Sotto... You had me at Rumi... Your poem beautifully captures the essence of legendary figures and the timeless allure of their stories. The opening lines evoke a sense of nostalgia for a bygone era, where overwhelming zest was undeniable, yet ultimately met its final trace. The imagery of living things dwelling in shadows with spirits weak adds a layer of melancholy to the narrative, emphasizing the contrast between light and dark, hope and despair. Congratulations on your first place..
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Date: 4/3/2024 6:54:00 PM
I enjoy to quotes of Rumi you post, Sotto Poet. I like this poem on Legends. You covered many different aspects of being a legend. Thought-provoking poetry, my dear friend. Thanks for sharing. Bill
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Date: 4/3/2024 1:35:00 AM
Legends always have a bit of mystery. Your arguments are so valid. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/2/2024 5:47:00 PM
Legends are a mix of fierce and faint, humans too but they lived for something, they shared with the world and would be remembered for it. " Legends never die, heroes are remembered, In tales and songs, their spirits tempered." Loved this line.
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Date: 4/2/2024 4:41:00 PM
SP, this opens up interesting questions. Legends may inspire us or they may depress us if we start thinking our own talents are limited. I am very glad I had the chance to read this since it's something to reflect on when thinking about what to do and what goals are realistic. It's also fun to think about what legends say about the culture they exist in. Sometimes, they might hide real truths. Hard to say when thinking about history and winners and losers of struggle.
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Date: 4/2/2024 12:30:00 PM
Legends never die, and theres o much mystery within and around us that time would unravel or maybe not, what a profound and deeply meaningful poem this is dr sotto, the flow and depth of what youv conveyed for this prompt is beyond impeccable and so very soulfully divine, I especially felt “ Unpredictable, the outcome lies, A mystery hidden from our eyes. “ Success, oh success, It's all in how you manage, no less. With grace and skill, you must possess.” Couldnt have said it any better! Wise! Well articulated truth, so poetically pleasing with excellent rhymes and metaphors! Pleasure reading this. Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 4/1/2024 5:39:00 PM
a comprehensive and delightful 'dive' into the concept of a legend. I particularly liked these words: Legends tell a narrative of mystery and grace. Mysterious spots have secrets, across space as well as Through every obstacle that may arise, You'll find the strength to reach the skies I liked the 'legends you mentioned--Haggard, Jones, Rumi, and Sinatra. Legends inspire as does your poem, dearest Sotto. Your rhythmic poem brought me joy this evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 4/1/2024 4:32:00 PM
Very beautiful poetry! :)
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Date: 4/1/2024 3:21:00 PM
A marvellous write Sotto, legends are a glimpse into historical past, stories that were written to last. Enjoyed the read… Beryl
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Date: 4/1/2024 3:05:00 PM
An excellent poem. Legends are what we hold to look back upon. It is a pleasant read.
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Date: 4/1/2024 1:42:00 PM
- You have really delved into legends, Las - "A mystery hidden from our eyes" ... is it fantasy or a true story ... no one knows 100 percent ... but exciting - A wonderful poem :) - Best wishes in the contest - Hope you had a lovely Easter :) - hugs
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